This draft of 'When the Tide Comes In' shows the changes we made following some evaluation.
- Remove any timelapse videos that are blurry or of a worse quality
- Cut out some of the sparkler scenes as there are too many and they are not adding anything more to the trailer
- Move the shot of Alex looking distressed to the end to have the most impact
- Remove the swearing as although the film would be a 15 the trailer would be more aimed at the 12 age bracket
- Put blank cards with text to explain the story more, it will make it feel more trailer like
- Ensure that the lyrics of the song do not clash with the voiceover as it makes it harder to listen to the words of the voiceover
- The montage of voices that is used over the distressed scene currently should be moved to the car scene and remove the real dialogue.
- We moved the bit where Tom says 'You know I love you' as the last thing he says to give it impact.
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